Haunted Hollows: One Step Closer - SCRIPT IS DONE! TIME FOR EDITS!
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Haunted Hollows: One Step Closer - SCRIPT IS DONE! TIME FOR EDITS!
All right, so, first, ever since I did this:
I've been brain storming, A LOT. I've been trying to develop an idea for what could be a kids cartoon that centers around three main characters:
Top left is Sam, the older sister I'll likely call Rachel and the younger brother I don't have a name for yet. The core idea, excluding the time travel stuff I've been tinkering with, is that they're three orphaned siblings looking for their parents, more specifically their mother (who they knew was alive) who vanished, along with their home, one night when supernatural forces came knocking at their door. After some time they begin to grow wary of the world around them and, with some help from both new friends made at the orphanage and an unknown person, begin investigating what happened and start searching for clues as to their mother's whereabouts.
The idea I have for this one-shot is based on these images:
in which Sam is following up a lead into an old abandoned cabin in the woods. It's essentially going to be a non-canon pilot type short comic that I WILL MAKE, even if I have to force myself. I'm likely going to begin writing it soon but my current predicament right now is thinking up a title. Smirky suggested "Mystery Quest" but that implies a more fantasy type thing, to me at least. My only idea so far has been "Specter" which would actually become relevant at some point, but not in the one-shot comic. The reason I say that is there are many different types of spirits and ghosts but "Specters" are a much more powerful entity altogether that can wreak serious havoc. I haven't quite worked out the lore much but it won't be relevant for the comic (at least I don't think it will be).
I only plan on having two characters in the comic, Sam and this character:
who will play an "Oracle" type role. I may have Rachel in there as well but, for the moment, I only have those two planned.
I've been brain storming, A LOT. I've been trying to develop an idea for what could be a kids cartoon that centers around three main characters:
Top left is Sam, the older sister I'll likely call Rachel and the younger brother I don't have a name for yet. The core idea, excluding the time travel stuff I've been tinkering with, is that they're three orphaned siblings looking for their parents, more specifically their mother (who they knew was alive) who vanished, along with their home, one night when supernatural forces came knocking at their door. After some time they begin to grow wary of the world around them and, with some help from both new friends made at the orphanage and an unknown person, begin investigating what happened and start searching for clues as to their mother's whereabouts.
The idea I have for this one-shot is based on these images:
in which Sam is following up a lead into an old abandoned cabin in the woods. It's essentially going to be a non-canon pilot type short comic that I WILL MAKE, even if I have to force myself. I'm likely going to begin writing it soon but my current predicament right now is thinking up a title. Smirky suggested "Mystery Quest" but that implies a more fantasy type thing, to me at least. My only idea so far has been "Specter" which would actually become relevant at some point, but not in the one-shot comic. The reason I say that is there are many different types of spirits and ghosts but "Specters" are a much more powerful entity altogether that can wreak serious havoc. I haven't quite worked out the lore much but it won't be relevant for the comic (at least I don't think it will be).
I only plan on having two characters in the comic, Sam and this character:
who will play an "Oracle" type role. I may have Rachel in there as well but, for the moment, I only have those two planned.
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Re: Haunted Hollows: One Step Closer - SCRIPT IS DONE! TIME FOR EDITS!
How much of the story will take place at the cabin? If the majority of it takes place there, do you think a "family" name might work well for your story? For example: call it the "*Insert family name here* Cabin"
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That's another predicament actually, the title of the short comic in question... For the comic, what I want to do is have sam checking out the cabin, looking for something.Koenig wrote:How much of the story will take place at the cabin? If the majority of it takes place there, do you think a "family" name might work well for your story? For example: call it the "*Insert family name here* Cabin"
Overall, the cabin is totally irrelevant because this is basically non-canon. I need help with coming up with a title for a series overall, subtitles for stuff like this aren't a priority just yet.
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Hmm... "Haunting?" Something Haunting?
*continues to wrack brain*
*continues to wrack brain*
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Hey Legend! Just thought of another possible title for your comic.
"Why Paranoid?"
got the idea from mazer's comment
"Why Paranoid?"
got the idea from mazer's comment
-Mazer wrote:@ legend. Why? Paranoid heh
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nah, that doesn't work
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I think I got it!
Haunted Hollows
Haunted Hollows
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SCRIPT IS DONE! REVISION TIME.
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Deus Ex Machinas and random ass shit EVERYWHERE!!!
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4th draft is done.
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working on 5th draft
Whatever amount of light heartedness and humor that was in the previous drafts is now gone. This may be a bad change.
Whatever amount of light heartedness and humor that was in the previous drafts is now gone. This may be a bad change.
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and 5th draft done
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